Developmental Editor for Romance & Character Driven Fiction
I’m a CIEP-trained developmental editor and published historical-romance author. I work with independent authors writing romance,
historical romance and character-driven fiction, offering support to strengthen their plot, characters, pacing and emotional arcs through
thoughtful, practical developmental feedback.
My Developmental Editing Services
Helping indie authors turn promising drafts into compelling stories
This service is for you if:
- You’ve finished a draft but know something isn’t fully working
- You feel too close to the story to see the bigger issues
- You need help with plot, pacing, characters, or emotional impact
- You want honest guidance
My services include:
- Plot and structure
- Character arcs and motivation
- Pacing and momentum
- Conflict, tension, and stakes
- Scene progression
- Reader engagement
What you receive:
- A full manuscript read-through
- A detailed editorial report
- In-manuscript comments
- Clear feedback on what is working
- Notes on what needs strengthening
- Practical revision suggestions
Thoughtful insights
“I hired Ann-Elizabeth for developmental editing on my book, focusing on story, plot, and characters. She provided thoughtful insights that helped me see my work from a new perspective. Her feedback pushed the story forward in ways I hadn’t considered.”
★★★★★
Steve, Romantasy Writer
Tailored feedback
“We talked a bit beforehand on my concerns and what I needed outside perspective on. She was able to tailor her feedback to those exact needs which I greatly appreciated. I will definitely be making lots of edits to improve in the areas she pointed out.”
★★★★★
Pat, Historical Romance Writer
Fast return
“I really admire the breadth and depth of feedback! It was a fast return also!
Thank you so much!”
★★★★★
Monique, Romance/Coming-of-Age Writer
My Published Books
The Stars of Time trilogy – a time travel historical romance
The Years of Fallen Stars
The Stars of Time Trilogy Book 1
Where the Moths Hide
The Stars of Time Trilogy Book 2
Ashes of the Storm
The Stars of Time Trilogy Book 3